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Originally Posted by Pensive
The phrase "She mimics Daddy's bold poise & unleashes the noise of the deaf instructor" simply shows the reader that actions speak louder than words. In this case everything he did in front of her finally coerced her to do it too. "deaf instructor" implying he was never there to teach her right from wrong.
I really appreciate the informative feed you left bro. I'll return the favor in like manor.
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It's really no problem, I'd have left more in depth feedback but I only had like 5 mins to type it all up as I had football training at 6. What site do you mainly go on? Because topical wise you're much too good for RV. You should sign up for Sacred Scriptures on RB where there are much better heads and it'll inspire you to elevate and keep getting better.