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New to RV
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IP:
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Originally Posted by AkHiLeEz_SkYLL
SkYLL is cold, leave you needin’ to breathe, like I verbally blew two at ya’ ribs//~/
just get a clue wit my spit, SkYLL treats hearts like cds, one move an’ it skips//~/
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THIS SHIT WAS HOT...^^ THAT LINE STOOD OUT THE MOST TO ME THOUGH, ONLY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM I CAN GIVE IS THE STRUCTURE COULD BE ALOT BETTER. YOU KNOW HOW TO COUNT BARS? THE WAY THATS TYPED UP WITH THE LINES ALL STRECHED OUT MAKES IT APPEAR LIKE IT DOESNT FLOW OR THERES TOO MANY RHYMES TRYIN TO BE CRAMMED INTO 1 BAR...THIS NICE FUH NET SHIT BUT IT DONT SEEM LIKE IT WOULD GO WITT A BEAT. GOOD SHIT THOUGH B. |