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Old 06-21-06, 02:24 PM   #5
Jay Rose
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i love this kanye song......your flow is really starting to hit, n your lyrics were always there.....mi lyrics are really deep....only advice would be to make ya stuff a lil more clear....like your voice at points its hard to hear what you say....but bothyall did a real good job....really good twist on this beat......i enjoyed
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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