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Old 06-20-06, 02:20 PM   #1
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Old 06-21-06, 06:49 AM   #2
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lol @ "dishes in their kitchen"...hmm I wonder what THAT was about...
haa

neway

beat is knockin

ur delivery was hot out the gate, then it broke down quickly...flow leveled out...but was consistent


M.I. lyrics sounded personal...and they were delivered well...flow was acceptable


I like the sound of this track.



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Old 06-21-06, 11:16 AM   #3
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this is deep...

Beat: i love that chick doin that shit wit her voice over the beat

cho... flow killin it... caught the personal lines up in there... nice delivery of real issues.. for real... solid kid...

hook: flows ill... yall did it here man

MI... damn ... i love the lyrical content you bringin man... shit from the heart like... damn... flows a step up and delivery is coo to...

DL'in this when i get home... this shit was krazy

solid yall solid
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Old 06-21-06, 01:55 PM   #4
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Aighhhh....Beats nice

Cho...feelin ya flow real nice....madd upped it,falls off once,but i think this fast flow really suits you man....Good emotion,could be upped but i like it its laid back....Lyrics nice....feelin em,deliverys koo...werd

Hook..too low couldnt understand it

MI

Word....flows nice,really feelin your delivery man....emotions koo....wow@how much you spittin and not losin your breath...are you like a superhuman or summin?lol...word up i love your delivery...real strong but at the same time it dont seem forced...word

Chos second verse is better than his first i think.real nice feelin the lyrics more too...koo verse homie...we need to collab again

Wow it went off pretty weird

Other than that good shit

Keep up

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Old 06-21-06, 02:24 PM   #5
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i love this kanye song......your flow is really starting to hit, n your lyrics were always there.....mi lyrics are really deep....only advice would be to make ya stuff a lil more clear....like your voice at points its hard to hear what you say....but bothyall did a real good job....really good twist on this beat......i enjoyed
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Old 06-22-06, 07:25 AM   #6
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no doubt..........good deal thx pl
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Old 06-23-06, 12:57 AM   #7
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lol beat is weird as fuck...but i like it...


cho...your flow is better on this track.....i think faster paced track may be your thing...lyrics are nice as usual...

delivery is good...hook comes in...you cant really notice its a hook at first....but its coo...could stand to be a bit more catchy....


2nd dude...delivery is nice....lyrics are coo.....nothin really wrong with this verse...u could switch ya delivery every once in a while....u stay with that..."ima eat you" delivery the whole time lol...

3rd verse is coo....

overall this was a solid track......im thinkin cho might be better on the faster shit for real


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Old 06-24-06, 06:11 PM   #8
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beat is really dope
quality is not bad, pretty good
flow is ill,perfect
man wheres this beat from? pretty dope
mmm did your vocal went down?
dope track, your best ive heard so far
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Old 06-24-06, 11:13 PM   #9
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thx ppl............im gettin @ yall now !
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Old 06-30-06, 12:49 PM   #10
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^'n man.................i usualy dont dubble minez but this was a ill joint man............some deepness real talk !
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Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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