Nice beat choice, LE used this in a ill ass song once. But it's yea a good beat choice. Your emotion is pretty good, your breathe runs short though from trying so hard it seems. But that might just seem like that cuz your vocal volume is to low for this hard beat. I'd say turn it up a bit more man. Your hook wasn't to bad, the quality is way better now and your more fluent on the beat. not bad man, keep it up.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230367

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