lol beat is weird as fuck...but i like it...


cho...your flow is better on this track.....i think faster paced track may be your thing...lyrics are nice as usual...

delivery is good...hook comes in...you cant really notice its a hook at first....but its coo...could stand to be a bit more catchy....


2nd dude...delivery is nice....lyrics are coo.....nothin really wrong with this verse...u could switch ya delivery every once in a while....u stay with that..."ima eat you" delivery the whole time lol...

3rd verse is coo....

overall this was a solid track......im thinkin cho might be better on the faster shit for real


rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

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