nice dude...lots of vocab in here. at the beginning, i didn't see much but as the piece progressed, the song became a little bit more complex along the way. structure was great...and i like the "tic tic tic" thing inbetween every verse...stanza...w/e. an abundance of imagery was put throughout the piece. that part really stuck out to me. flow was great...everything was smooth and linked together. it's really more like a poem to me...but that's just me

awesome piece and keep making more 9/10

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