Your pressense is shown very well, nice a clear with a great delivery. Your flow was pretty solid as well, you seem to be getting better fast man good shit. Your lyrics are decent, some flaws in some places but it aint bad. This beat I dislike, it's not horrible but it aint that hot for a banger you know. overall I thought you did a good job with your parts, the beats just gay lol.
rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230367