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Old 06-24-06, 05:02 PM   #10
Jay Rose
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thanks for the feed man.....on this song, the beat is okay sounds a lil simple....your volume leves come in good. you sound hesetant on your flow....its like your still reading, it puts you off a lil....sample is the hook, not too much to say im starting to get over the whole sample thing.....konvict aka stacks....you come in loud, its muffles out paranoids verse....but you were really on beat you rode it well, your spit control is getting better....some good stuff but production has to be better, smooth out the rough edges, like difference in verse volume....beat is not that gripping so you need to up the energy a bit, but not a bad track...just keep workin on ya flow
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