It's not a freestyle if it's written, it's a freeverse
anyway your flow was pretty good, nice and smooth and one thing I noticed your quality was better and you actually sounded like yourself. I'm not sure if that was the effects of you being pined or if you was just trying harder but w/e. Your emotion was decent I see some nice lines in there. good lyrics gurl, overall decent...the beat was poppy but you should start grabbin beats for yourself instead of downloadin em off limewire.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231062

just leave feed though you heard it already, thanks 1

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