lol at this beat, makes me laught, robotic voice, mmm I dunno man, flow is cool but you had prob trying to catch it,mmm energie iss realllyyy boring seriously, no hate, when you record,are you alone at home? cuz if so, dont be scared to scream thats how youll be good, hook iss eee like I say you try to put your words longer to fit in the beat, its like " I fucked your mommmaaaa" lol it was an example, you sound like a robot seriously, try to do something with that, like being more confortable with your lyrics and all, you seem like reading,

not your best bro my bad

rtf on revelations