I like the beat,flows gettin much better,better one the second verse thought,seems more...like you more in tone with the beat nah mean??Delivery was ok,laid back still seems a lil stiff but you gettin there bro!!feelin the lyrics real nice,Hook was dope,i thought.Emotion needs uppin still seems a bit,meh on that aspect...Presence is getting a lot better man,more confidence,I def.liked 2nd verse better...
Good track,your elevating!
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