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Old 07-14-06, 12:06 AM   #12
So.Rell
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Daubs I KO"D you 5 times, you left the battle broke jerk
So fuck a win bitch, you gotta try and get some votes 1st
We meet again? Im'a splatter and end him
Cuz if 'threes's a charm'......then six has got to be a platinum pendant
Yeah I lost the belt to butler.....he's pretty good you cunt
But you been in the league twice as long as me
And never been to the champ ships once.........
Fuck wordplay, my personals making you flop more
this loss is graphic, like the ONLY thing RV will give you props for

vs.

wack fuck acts tuff but his raps suck, i know im doubtin em
cuz hows he gonna man up when he's known for goin down on them
and your girls prolly cheatin now the les, n' aint hatin son
but how can she not like a bit of pussy when shes dating one

Both verse had personals thats what I like to see, but some of the wording could have been better to make the punch hit harder. I like how Tav added Wordplay in his personals spices it up more of a punch...Daubs your only problem was your wording and some of the personals were weak.

Vote - N.Tavarez
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