Wats that 2 twenty dolla bills in ya hand?.. dude thats chump money
cuz only an idiot like you would rock a Brewers hat wit a Colts Jersey.

vs.

Yo i seen this cats face. it def left merattled
you so ugly dogg i can repost ya pic and win this battle
Dont sing other cats music. shit will be weak
last time this kid Lip sank, he put a crack in the concrete


those were the lines that stood out in each. Sonny had a few more in there that I could'a quoted, but they were just "ok" to me. Both verses need better wording in the punches...especially Euthanize. That sonny bono line is a perfect example. And I liked that sub concept that Sonny used, but again, the wording ruined the punch...didn't really need to say 18 foot subs. I think "sub sandwiches" would'a worked better. I'm just rambling on. Sonny's verse was more polished and the concepts and wording worked better.

vote - Sonny

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