yessir.

pic battle?

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yaa lemme find onee

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231352

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231342

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231355

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2794633

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Up on sum votesss people letss dooo thisss

Sonny is a bitch, and yes i'll beat you punk
i'll smoke Dimebags like I put a gram of weed in the blunt
son don't want da funk.
chump, I'm in the alphabets i'ma G, i'll leave u bloody 'n grey
.. I come out @ night so I'm a nigga that say fuck a Sonny Day.







Ya.

u see the pic of the kid .. i'm real flamboyant & hansome
Sonny the first dude I've seen who skin of more pale than Marilyn Manson.
Wats that 2 twenty dolla bills in ya hand?.. dude thats chump money
cuz only an idiot like you would rock a Brewers hat wit a Colts Jersey.
like Kanye West would say, dogg u whack and u hella boogie
u so ugly.. u look like Jack Jeebs from the first Men In Black Movie.
Fuck New York, Italians w/e. all that fake ballin' needs to stop
how u gonna act hard countin' money in the back of ya mamas pizza shop?
somethings really weird about u son, dude got a belly like Irv Gotti
I bet if u'd open that door he's leaning on u'd find about 12 dead bodies.
didn't mean to startle anybody, u spooked i'm playin wit u like a basketball
I got guns that'll leave ya chest matchin' them colorfull tiles on tha wall.
E might fall, But I get ^ keep movin'. I can teach things u don't know
.. my left haymaker have u feelin' like u ran into a tree like Sonny Bono.
Sonny D is a homo, u runnin' while i'm buckin' shots @ ya dome
.. i'll kill ya whole family - then be lookin' 4 a Dime like I was Mike Jones.
i'm sittin' on my throne. sucka I see u got that avy for a reason
.. Euth will leave u in a dissapointment - like the Knicks 2005 season.
Euthanize is thiefin', takin' lives .. so Sonny ur gonna die now
cuz I got hollow-tip bullets, matchin' the thickness of ya eyebrows.
i'm high now .. on cloud 27 seein' all different type of colors
i'll Son D, like I was the broke ass idiot who nutted in his mother.


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bwuahahahahaha omg
and you laughed at MY pic? HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHa
wtf is wrong with you?
homie look like tyrone biggums

madd ug

Yo i seen this cats face. it def left merattled
you so ugly dogg i can repost ya pic and win this battle
hands are blown, wat type of freak is u holmes?
U got Shaq's hands and Mugsy Bogues dome
gold ass front. chomping on some ass man
probly tried to finish his plate and dinner and bit on the trash can
how can u diss the knick's bitch n give no respect
i got proof. that ur sporting them around ya neck

And ya aint gangsta, ill cut u up and give u scars
them 2 cells, only time you'll be surrounded by bars
dammmm... im hurt with that verse im suprised
he got Bags in this battle, to bad there under his eyes
Dont sing other cats music. shit will be weak
last time this kid Lip sank, he put a crack in the concrete
kids not gangsta. about to tip with no gun on the shoulder
you aint holding up anyone? looks like ur about to fall over
i'll show this kid no love,when he cant fit it no gloves
a knuckle sandwhich, dude throws 18 foots subs
but word its a drag. that you ever tried to start
I DoubtFire you spit.this is you trying to get the part

ha.

thasswassup.

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139 views.

no votes.

getthefuckouttahere.

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Wats that 2 twenty dolla bills in ya hand?.. dude thats chump money
cuz only an idiot like you would rock a Brewers hat wit a Colts Jersey.

vs.

Yo i seen this cats face. it def left merattled
you so ugly dogg i can repost ya pic and win this battle
Dont sing other cats music. shit will be weak
last time this kid Lip sank, he put a crack in the concrete


those were the lines that stood out in each. Sonny had a few more in there that I could'a quoted, but they were just "ok" to me. Both verses need better wording in the punches...especially Euthanize. That sonny bono line is a perfect example. And I liked that sub concept that Sonny used, but again, the wording ruined the punch...didn't really need to say 18 foot subs. I think "sub sandwiches" would'a worked better. I'm just rambling on. Sonny's verse was more polished and the concepts and wording worked better.

vote - Sonny

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dope battle man 1-0...more votes?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231346
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231342
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231354
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231356

like Kanye West would say, dogg u whack and u hella boogie
u so ugly.. u look like Jack Jeebs from the first Men In Black Movie.

^^lol

somethings really weird about u son, dude got a belly like Irv Gotti
I bet if u'd open that door he's leaning on u'd find about 12 dead bodies.


word nice verse but like shake said u got work on that worded you had nice concepts and funny lines...you dissed me better in the cypher lol

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sunny


Yo i seen this cats face. it def left merattled
you so ugly dogg i can repost ya pic and win this battle

dammmm... im hurt with that verse im suprised
he got Bags in this battle, to bad there under his eyes
Dont sing other cats music. shit will be weak
last time this kid Lip sank, he put a crack in the concrete

but word its a drag. that you ever tried to start
I DoubtFire you spit.this is you trying to get the part


word nice verse...i thought euthanize had better concepts..but sonny i like the wording more in ya verse like shake said...that doubtfire and lip sank line were nice..cool verse

vote dimebags

mhm.

good battle.

I shouldn't have underestimated you.

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