ok...this ansane beat is mad smoothe...def feeling it...ok...verse...not liking how u opened...ya delivery is too regualar conversational...not smoothe enough for the mellow mood of this track...hook...wasn't bad...it was good but not spectcular...the girls girls part to similar to jay's bit hook from rakim...on his song girls, girls, girls...even tho u only said it twice...on the 3 bar you shoulda had another repetive phrase or some type of punched phrase to make it repetitve enough to be catchy...verse 2 flow was same as one...really all three verses flow was koo jus think ya delivery aint go along with beat it was drasticly overblown but it was jus off enough to make this a mundane track...overall its good but jus not that catchy.....1

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