Word, on some pimp shit and shit, nah'm saying and stuff?


Intro: SPuL
First verse: SPuL
Hook: SPuL
Second verse: SPuL
Third verse: SPuL
Beat: Ansane

www.soundclick.com/spul

LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232669
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232692

This track was quite good the beat was good flow was on point lyrics was smooth got on some real pimp shit in this I liked it 8/10

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Tony Green's Soundclick

rtf on "Roses Are Red"

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232932

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Tony Green's Soundclick

RTF On your "indepth" feed. upppp

beat is pretty cool
ok i havent heard your tracks in a long time your voice has more bass to it now
hook is dope catchy and ur delivery is cool on it
first verse is ok nothing that i really loved but it was cool good flow
2nd verse i was feeling it better good flow here too
3rd verse you come in a little more mellow cool flow here too
idk cant really point out anything negative really reminds me of jins girls freestyle

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ok...this ansane beat is mad smoothe...def feeling it...ok...verse...not liking how u opened...ya delivery is too regualar conversational...not smoothe enough for the mellow mood of this track...hook...wasn't bad...it was good but not spectcular...the girls girls part to similar to jay's bit hook from rakim...on his song girls, girls, girls...even tho u only said it twice...on the 3 bar you shoulda had another repetive phrase or some type of punched phrase to make it repetitve enough to be catchy...verse 2 flow was same as one...really all three verses flow was koo jus think ya delivery aint go along with beat it was drasticly overblown but it was jus off enough to make this a mundane track...overall its good but jus not that catchy.....1

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233055

Playing.

Ansane beats are allways easy to work with. feeling the intro.. kinda attention grabbing, few clicks and pops in it.
Good flow,stay on point through out it. nice production, good dubs and adlibs. hooks ok
Rhymes are simple, but when you tryna make commercial music thats typical

good track, RTF link posted start of this post.

Beat is smooth, your voice sounds weird over it though, but I think it's just the way you flow. You're very expressive, sometimes it seems a bit excessive, but that's just you you can't help it. The hook is thoed, turned out better than I expected. This is better than that other joint I listened to the other day. You've definately polished your skills. holla

^aiight props to all for feed. RTF on all who needed it returnd. Tho fuck Tony Green for fakin' his feedback. fuckin' loser .uppppppp

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Listen'n

Ansane good producer...i fuck's wit his beats

1st: lmao like this verse....good delivery
hook: Thats my shit....Im downloadin this shit dog
2nd: LIke the myspace concept keep it pimpin' feel me...
hook: Same
3rd:good closure...lyrics nasty son....kicked it nice....attention getter....

Song Grabbed my attention thats that shit something i try kickin' real west coast feel ic snoop an nate dodouble g on this joint son for real for real....fuck it man ima download this joint...an play it for dem ho's down the block feel me...keep it 100 an RTF....1

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^favor returned. props for feed yo.

also I added new sample. so y'all go check mofo

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