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Old 08-16-06, 11:25 PM   #7
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--So.Rell--

I'ma win...Don't believe me, then bet your damn jewelery.
Time is money, & quite frankly you not even Second Hand to me.
>>I can see what you're getting at but this was poorly delivered.

You not just whack as fuck, you not original...An Imitation.
Kempo want nuffin but skill in the league?
Then Jadakiss this bitch & get Aer Out the situation.
>>Once again, the delivery is bad and flow is stretched. Not a bad concept, though.

I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
>>Nice set.

Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.
>>Once again, pretty nice.

No jigsaws involved, Only piece missin is ya teeth and your Saturn
Everyone has Rell Bolded in Predictions ever notice a Pattern.
>>Not liking.

Yea I had 17 Weeks under my belt, check the Archves to get me
I just restarted my record to make sure Whack nggas got out the league quickly.
>>Not really direct enough.



--Aeral--

there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
>>Nice hit.

Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
>>Haha...

Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
>>I seen this type of line - but it's still mean.

This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out
>>Once again, niceness.

Face the truth faggot, accept the facts.. battlin' me? this flame's gone,
you been trapped in the closet longer than R. kelly in that same song
>>No, I'm not liking this too much.

Your style's predictable as fuck, so this battle's your loss kid,
What kinda wack fuck can't form a punch off a ClichéSite.com concept?
>>Could have been delivered better cause it's not that great of a concept to begin with.


Vote: Aeral
Not even close. Just hit from all angles and dropped a comedic verse.
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