What up dude???

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1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233374
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233376
3. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233382
4. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233390

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Aiiyyo...

I'ma win...Don't believe me, then bet your damn jewelery.
Time is money, & quite frankly you not even Second Hand to me.
You not just whack as fuck, you not original...An Imitation.
Kempo want nuffin but skill in the league?
Then Jadakiss this bitch & get Aer Out the situation.
I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.
No jigsaws involved, Only piece missin is ya teeth and your Saturn
Everyone has Rell Bolded in Predictions ever notice a Pattern.
Yea I had 17 Weeks under my belt, check the Archves to get me
I just restarted my record to make sure Whack nggas got out the league quickly.

Pressed for time...My bad I'll try next week.

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there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out
Face the truth faggot, accept the facts.. battlin' me? this flame's gone,
you been trapped in the closet longer than R. kelly in that same song
Your style's predictable as fuck, so this battle's your loss kid,
What kinda wack fuck can't form a punch off a ClichéSite.com concept?

I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.


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there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out


V/ Aeral

Just better overall.. not as played as rell

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--So.Rell--

I'ma win...Don't believe me, then bet your damn jewelery.
Time is money, & quite frankly you not even Second Hand to me.
>>I can see what you're getting at but this was poorly delivered.

You not just whack as fuck, you not original...An Imitation.
Kempo want nuffin but skill in the league?
Then Jadakiss this bitch & get Aer Out the situation.
>>Once again, the delivery is bad and flow is stretched. Not a bad concept, though.

I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
>>Nice set.

Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.
>>Once again, pretty nice.

No jigsaws involved, Only piece missin is ya teeth and your Saturn
Everyone has Rell Bolded in Predictions ever notice a Pattern.
>>Not liking.

Yea I had 17 Weeks under my belt, check the Archves to get me
I just restarted my record to make sure Whack nggas got out the league quickly.
>>Not really direct enough.



--Aeral--

there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
>>Nice hit.

Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
>>Haha...

Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
>>I seen this type of line - but it's still mean.

This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out
>>Once again, niceness.

Face the truth faggot, accept the facts.. battlin' me? this flame's gone,
you been trapped in the closet longer than R. kelly in that same song
>>No, I'm not liking this too much.

Your style's predictable as fuck, so this battle's your loss kid,
What kinda wack fuck can't form a punch off a ClichéSite.com concept?
>>Could have been delivered better cause it's not that great of a concept to begin with.


Vote: Aeral
Not even close. Just hit from all angles and dropped a comedic verse.

thanks for the votes guys.

2-0, uppin'

Yea I figured I was gonna lose didn't have much time been workin a lot

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Yeah it is understandable that peoples have lives n shit.. thanks for showing though man

So Rell
I'ma win...Don't believe me, then bet your damn jewelery.
Time is money, & quite frankly you not even Second Hand to me.
ok punch, could be worded better
You not just whack as fuck, you not original...An Imitation.
Kempo want nuffin but skill in the league?
Then Jadakiss this bitch & get Aer Out the situation.
ehh
I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
good punch but I heard it before
Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.
good punch but word it better
No jigsaws involved, Only piece missin is ya teeth and your Saturn
Everyone has Rell Bolded in Predictions ever notice a Pattern.
self glorification with out a punch
Yea I had 17 Weeks under my belt, check the Archves to get me
I just restarted my record to make sure Whack nggas got out the league quickly.
nah closer

^ I expected a lot more from so rell in this battle man. Thats all.

Aeral
there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
ehhh atleast he did home work on em
Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
Too simple of a punch
Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
Decent line
This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out
good punch
Face the truth faggot, accept the facts.. battlin' me? this flame's gone,
you been trapped in the closet longer than R. kelly in that same song
stretched and could have been worded better
Your style's predictable as fuck, so this battle's your loss kid,
What kinda wack fuck can't form a punch off a ClichéSite.com concept?
please explain this one

Im voting for Aeral for having more quotable punches. He had the best line of the battle and 3 other bars I liked a lil. Both should have came harder though.

V/ Aeral

RTF in my battle with PP2

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

So Rell

I'ma win...Don't believe me, then bet your damn jewelery.
Time is money, & quite frankly you not even Second Hand to me.
Nice attepmt But poorly Worded

You not just whack as fuck, you not original...An Imitation.
Kempo want nuffin but skill in the league?
Then Jadakiss this bitch & get Aer Out the situation.
....Aii...

I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
...lol Damn...

Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.
....Nuttin Specail....

No jigsaws involved, Only piece missin is ya teeth and your Saturn
Everyone has Rell Bolded in Predictions ever notice a Pattern.
...Decent....

Yea I had 17 Weeks under my belt, check the Archves to get me
I just restarted my record to make sure Whack nggas got out the league quickly.
....Didnt rhyme and it was weak...



--Aeral--

there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
Nice

Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
...LOL...

Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
...Decent...

This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out
...decent...

Face the truth faggot, accept the facts.. battlin' me? this flame's gone,
you been trapped in the closet longer than R. kelly in that same song
..>Weak..

Your style's predictable as fuck, so this battle's your loss kid,
What kinda wack fuck can't form a punch off a ClichéSite.com concept?
...Umm Meh!...


Vote: Aeral

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next time.. don't vote on my battle if you don't get something. or just ask me BEFORE voting.

I heard of you, Mixtape was ass & Album flopped...you bold whore.
Silence is Golden...If you took that Advice you would've Sold More.
COOL
Cold Core, This is a Corner Shot, it's time to take all.
Nut Rider - I'm waitin for my Que to Pocket this ngga who 8 Ball's.
IIGHT.. FUNNI.. KINDA

Vs.


there's no shame in loosing a champ match, & that bet's fair...
but didn't slicKnife stab you down weeks before just to get there?
Yo kempo, the August event is looking dope. It's about to burst..
Rell forget the girlfriends pic battle, i think you gotta have 1 first
LMFAO.. NICE
Bitches stay away from you, & ya writtens, just admit they suck
So.Rell's never dropped a hot single... or even picked one up
COO
This is my first battle here, so i havent won.. which'll lay doubts..
It just means that I 'owe 1.. like the year ya concepts got played out
NICE WORDPLAY

V/AERAL.. SIMPLY BETTER

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