Alot of energy on this track. Wayy too simple lyrics...No hate, I wasnt feeling this song that much..


Intro-I liked the intro the most. It was tight. I liked it.
Hook - Your hook could've been better. It was nice, but too many vocals on it.
Verse 1- Best verse in my opinion. Still simple rhymes, but nice energy. Nice delivery, it went with tha track and tha hook. Sounded kinda freestyled...But overall, a nice verse. Nothing to exciting though.
Verse 2- This verse was ight, but tha energy turned down a lil. It sounded like you was reading off a piece of paper...bad flow. You still had excitement, but it wasn't like the first verse.
Overall- THis was a ight track, not something I would bump. Could barely hear tha lyrics, and flow was kinda off...but still a nice track and you could only get better.

Nice shit...kkeep doing you!

*shake something*
rtf

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