Pretty nice battle.

Thoughts was decent...I just don't like the way u worded/setup some of the punchlines. like the closer, I think it would've been more effective w/o the "..." in there. Same goes for ur opener.
Comedian's verse was a little more polished. The lines were worded well, and the concepts were fresh and witty. Only line I didn't like was the closer. Nice verse.

vote - Comedian

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