Check.



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233376
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233374
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233375
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233382

w00t im in

word.

12-ish = 6 on each person

word

Edit: i dont think the other guyy will show, lets just go 10 on each other.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233384
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233376
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233374
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233383

links soon. quick key fow u.

you a comedian right bitch? i'll make you bleed for nurses
coz your name only applys....when people read your verses
true your the worst kid, bitches know i snag when i blast
and if your more of a man , its only cuz your a fag and a half
you droppin hot? you aint fly bruh, seriously your a weak liar
bitch you must be livin' in the middle east...coz you seem to ceasefire
die bruh, u a poser - n' you'll be choking when the ropes on
and we dont need a genius to see theres only one dope COM
im above the law man, i fuckin smack it n' whore 'em
resulting in your limbs less active .....than a graphic forum

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Here to make sure geeks are dropped when I slay and damage fakes
Break a faggot's state, put the heat to Solid and make him evaporate
Leave you slumping, Sol - I pity nerds who suck and got nothing hot
No worries... I got sentimental bullets... that are touching Thoughts
Make you die T, looking for new ways to be called ill? Shit is wack son
And I'd be calling you an original con'cept you don't even have one
Grip the loss, he's fake with his wack shit; we know this bitch has lost
POW!
^^See... all it takes is a distraction... to just get rid of Thoughts
This bitch kid is lame, getting a beatdown cause my shit brings the pain
Comedian will batter you until you swell and can't fit in your frame

^

up.

g/l.

Thoughtz:

you a comedian right bitch? i'll make you bleed for nurses
coz your name only applys....when people read your verses
you droppin hot? you aint fly bruh, seriously your a weak liar
bitch you must be livin' in the middle east...coz you seem to ceasefire
die bruh, u a poser - n' you'll be choking when the ropes on
and we dont need a genius to see theres only one dope COM


Vs.


Here to make sure geeks are dropped when I slay and damage fakes
Break a faggot's state, put the heat to Solid and make him evaporate
Leave you slumping, Sol - I pity nerds who suck and got nothing hot
No worries... I got sentimental bullets... that are touching Thoughts
Make you die T, looking for new ways to be called ill? Shit is wack son
And I'd be calling you an original con'cept you don't even have one
Grip the loss, he's fake with his wack shit; we know this bitch has lost
POW!
^^See... all it takes is a distraction... to just get rid of Thoughts


Good battle... I gotta say com took this one with the closer.. up until there it was even.


Vote: Comedian

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thanks for the vote.

good battle com

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up over no-shows

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Pretty nice battle.

Thoughts was decent...I just don't like the way u worded/setup some of the punchlines. like the closer, I think it would've been more effective w/o the "..." in there. Same goes for ur opener.
Comedian's verse was a little more polished. The lines were worded well, and the concepts were fresh and witty. Only line I didn't like was the closer. Nice verse.

vote - Comedian

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Comedian wins 2-0

Comedian (1-0)

Soliduz (0-1)

MCvisual (0-1)

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