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Old 08-19-06, 07:28 PM   #14
TeamOne
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Kid you'll get toss around...no way you're winning this round
Cuz you can search 'n pick up lines all day...
...But you still get turned down!
.. decent
And got knives to scar ya jaw, so talking will get ya shanked
After readin ya 2bars i was LMAO...
so if ya wanna hand me my ass, thanks!
u hoebag, the concept was fuckin raw as hell but u worded it horribly

Vs.

try to throw stones ya miss me, but mine hit your weak reality...
he attempted Stayin on his Grizzly but got charged with beastiality..
weak/unrelated setup which made the overall punch weak
try to let the disses bounce off you, cause im not gon lie ya very wack..
but he couldnt Shake It off if he wrote his verse to that Mariah Carey track..
ummmmmmmm gay concept..... ur punches are so weird

i didnt like Precize's concepts or wording or structure, there was sumthin very off about it all....... Ken on the other hand has the style i like better and his first punch was the best of the battle..... his second punch was a way better concept but he fucked up.... anyways

V/Ken
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