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Old 08-21-06, 05:52 PM   #3
djb
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vocals sound a little soft. the horn is drowning them off. pretty good flow. the adlibs are a little off. i like the beat cut. i think the chorus could be turned up a little bit. the lyrics are ok, but they could be better. i couldnt understand you in some parts. you start going fast and with the beat as loud as it is it makes it hard to decipher. the beat is nice though. real good club sound. i like how that ended, didnt drag it out to long just let it end, pretty nice job here.
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