http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4344607

i made the beat a while ago, PT used it already but fuck off its my beat

imma leave two links soon

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2823101
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2823103

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uppppy ..........

vocals sound a little soft. the horn is drowning them off. pretty good flow. the adlibs are a little off. i like the beat cut. i think the chorus could be turned up a little bit. the lyrics are ok, but they could be better. i couldnt understand you in some parts. you start going fast and with the beat as loud as it is it makes it hard to decipher. the beat is nice though. real good club sound. i like how that ended, didnt drag it out to long just let it end, pretty nice job here.

I like this beat of course you already know

its FIYA SON

alright for the breakdown

Whats Hot:The Beat of course
The flow change-ups

Whats Good:The pressense/emotion

Whats Ok:the mixing and the flow

You def. have gotten better everytime i listen your song
This is pretty solid

Whats Off:The hook is off a little bit you gotta make people know what your talkin about....

Whats Wack:nothin

Overall:this shits ok its more of a mixtape typa track.....ur def. gettin better tho a lil while longer and u'll be gettin better just keep doing it man..u'll get it...this is an ok song......just switch up the hook a lil bit......6.2/10

keep it up

-Past Tense aka PT

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thanks apreciate the feed

beat is ok...nothin that like jumps out to me or nothing...but its coo....

sounds like the mix is maybe a lil loud..or not mixed to the beat well...it kinda hurts my ears....flow is ok...lyrics are ok...i think the hook is ok..but coulda been executed better...

delivery is pretty good too...there not a lot wrong with this...its just not anything i would bump in the whip or anything

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