Yeh this was tight as fuck dawg, Fuckin' great story tellin' and imagenation. Word usage was of tha hook, and ya flow is crazy nice son. Kept on-point throuh-out tha whole peice, and I enjoyed this throuh to tha end dawgie. Keep droppin' dem spits playah, I'll peep'em for-sure.

Fav. lines::

-"You think your safe in the dark but your never alone
Because when the lights are out your shadow finds him self at home
Free to roam, in the dark with camouflage capabilities
Waiting for the precise moment to attack and get rid of me"

I like how you set it off, but I liked tha whole spit, no doubt-no problems wit-it at all.

I think this would be a hot track dawgie

uppin'

peace