after reading the first couple lines i could tell your just talkin about how good of an emcee you are, this is elementary yo! dont write about how good you are, write something that will show how good you are, this doesnt do that at all. finda topic other than "im dope" and write a in depth piece on it, put your thoughts into it, then we can see how good you really are, cause pretty much anyone can write shit like this! and frankly i think you are wack ,your flow sucks and your lines are extremely played!

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