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Old 02-21-03, 08:58 AM   #1
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now you dont know me
a full scale hurricane couldent slow me
i create greater earthquakes than in kobe
ill erupt a volcanoe over those that try to overthrow me
above yours is where my flows be
im omnipotent and omniscent in hip hop
these are the kind of flows that cant be stopped
i give it to ya smooth but harder than a rock
and hard rhymes like this dont ever flop
im like a bat cause my sound is ultra
you say yours are but you teifin like a vulture
im the ambassoder to rap culture
non existent my faults are
perfect like a sculpture
i can be mean
but i keep it clean
not too obscene
but like nothin that you ever seen
if its a movie then im dominating every scene
lyrically aint anybody matching me
so why you try that
midget fools tryna act phat
never once seen a gun but ya talkin bout yo gat
i hate that
cant take that
wanna shut the fools up who create that
all my rhymes are hard as diamonds
polished like jewellery, can be longer than time and
so holy they need a shrine and
i know just how to make your body wind and
all my rhymes one of a kind and
quality never declinin
i am always on the rise and
lyrical ladder always climbing
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Old 02-21-03, 12:31 PM   #2
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after reading the first couple lines i could tell your just talkin about how good of an emcee you are, this is elementary yo! dont write about how good you are, write something that will show how good you are, this doesnt do that at all. finda topic other than "im dope" and write a in depth piece on it, put your thoughts into it, then we can see how good you really are, cause pretty much anyone can write shit like this! and frankly i think you are wack ,your flow sucks and your lines are extremely played!

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