^weak reply... and read a dictionary... how else?


That was nice, you do have some tight vocab but vocab isn't everything. Too much of it can ruin a verse simply because majority of people aren't familiar with "Webster". You had good content in this too and you're right, the flow did get a lil choppy at times but I'm sure it's something that is worked out vocally. That's the problem with audio and text, what is right for audio isn't always right for text but what is right for text usually is right for audio. It's almost like a 1 way thing. Keep postin

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