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Old 09-03-06, 04:41 PM   #20
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Voted For: Mystic.

Im holdin that Slicknife everytime I swing im slicin at ya ribs
My Tech Skillz have ya brains hanging low like u was wit tha boy jibbs
^^ LOL, Funny 6/10
You switched ya style up real fast dog dont act like i didnt notice
But my Theory is you didnt write half of it..you bit and stole it
^^Played Concept, kinda weak 5/10
Your better off changing your Eyedentity but still they'd pay-u-less
Shit mine aswell just give me the the ring...
...................n ill put an arrow through ya body n leave u leg-a-
lus
^^^Supposed to ryme with payless...? Idk 5/10
You didnt elevate after takin a break...your punches just mys-tic
I could put my face up to your screen n u still couldnt hit it!
^^^Decent 7/10
Im winning this series you can't beat me...just try n match
ill give you a lil push to start Rawking....
................But its like shit hit the fan cuz you came flyin back!
You rhymin whack you aint ill u dreamin like a fuckin Mimesis
You wont win damn didnt think it'd take u 2 times to realize this
^^^ Funny, i liked alot 8/10, Decent wordplay
So you wanted another shot i wont turn you down whore....fine
I would bold some more ppl who merked you...
.....................But shit im Precize and dont got any more lines
^^^ Nice way to explain structure, Decent closer 8/10
AWSOME PERSONALL






The link above show this kid been played with Dumblines
Battle Erel Avent an thought he could beat him with a Cum line... LOL

^^^Cute, but made no sence, Jerkin off to text maybe? Idk on this one bro
All in all was funny 6/10

He'll get revoked in this battle I provoked, choking like a first timer's smoke
This I quote, his skills beyond broke, even his avatar proves he's a pass joke...
^^ Nice wordplay not overdone 8/10 Good personall 7/10

so really lets raise the stakes and spit venomous like u played with snakes
sprayed the eight, that'll leave more holes on ya then the foctory of crates.....
Decent punch, concept played 7/10
When rex flexed his mad text, I smash necks then ask, "Next?"
His guns are full of shit, even his finger proves that he packs an "assed text" ......
^^^ I see how you tried to get that to fit in the ryme sheme, but ass text
Is un-comprhrendable by some....5/10
His whackness reminds me of a candy, the way he'll spit it "Now and Later"
No doubt I am greater, but mystic couldn't "elevate" if he wrote in elevators.....
LOL^^^ VERY NICE, BEST LINE BY THE WAY 9/10
Truth is, I spit congruent rhymes, that are fluent, while his come up truant
So just like mystic in Mexican empires, this kid and location will end up in ruins.... EZ... MOTHER FUCKER...
^^ Nice name play....Ryme scheme worked....7/10


Alright, Mystic your whole ".........." Structure threw me off a little so i had to go back and read it again
Your closing line concept was a lil basic but fit really well......

REXLESS..... My favorite line of yours was " His whackness reminds me of a candy, the way he'll spit it "Now and Later"
No doubt I am greater, but mystic couldn't "elevate" if he wrote in elevators"

MYSTIC: My favorite line of yours was wanted another shot i wont turn you down whore....fine
I would bold some more ppl who merked you...
.....................But shit im Precize and dont got any more lines


MY VOTE....NOW AS UNDERSTOOD, I BELIVE REXLESS HAD BETTER PUNCHES, MYSTIC CAME REAL HARD ON PERSONALS, REXLESS
HAS BETTER STRUCTURE, AND A MORE VISONARY RYMESCHEME, BUT I HAVE TO SAY I AM GIVING THIS VOTE TO MYSIC...
THE CREATIVITY YOU USED BRO IN HIS OTHER OPPENENTS NAMES I NEVER SEEN BEFORE, I ACTULLY WANT
TO DO SOMTHING LIKE THIS IN THE NEAR FUTURE, 10 FOR CREATIVITY, AT FIRST I DIDENT REALIZE IT
WAS HIS OTHERS OPPENENTS TILL I WENT AND CHECKED...........

VOTE/ RICHARD
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