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Old 09-14-06, 09:55 PM   #5
Ysdat
Whys That?
 
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beats ok, not too bad, somthing i would consider using easy to get deep like wha!

vocals drop in, very simple lyrics and content in this, flow is on,quality is decent, first verse is ok, coulda got a bit more tech with and and dropped some thought provoking metaphores in it but yeh........

hooks cool, up'd the emotion brongs attention back to the song.lol

second verse is ok, again guy comes through simple, nothing tech or thought provoking, its some what clech'e while still holding it down decent enough.

overall its a cool track, personaly i would'a added some more meta's to get cunts thinking, but stay stay doing you.
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