Listen'n
damn man i have this same beat done lol..but w/e an plus i was gonna RTF man so dont post some shit like RTF for starters man i know what i gots to do...
HooK: Coulda bin done differently but it was hot in a sense cuz it was done differently....
1st: Flow is crazy lil choppy but works....like the lyrics concepts on point..like the flow...presence was nice...
HooK: Same
2nd: Coulda bin mixed better sounded distorted but he had some nice punchlines...like that shit proper flow was nice like the coke an got made lines...good shit..
HOok: Same
3rd: better than ur first verse like the presence on this one...u still sound a lil off beat...but picked it up....over all good
Over-all my theory
Ur mixin was on point... second dudes mixin coulda bin done better buts how y'all put it together so what else can i say over all solid track...the beat was fire an coulda came a lot harder at it than y'all did...but good shit my dude...by the way this how u give real feed back nigga..my ratin.. 8/10