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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3079922
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235033
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Chorus 1/Verse 1 - The first part sounds kinda word but the transition into the Verse is pretty good, i love the flow and sound of person's voice. Emotion/Swagger is good, keeping flow on point and lyrics are straight. You carry alot of confidence in this verse which is really good. Keep Up..

Chorus - Again kinda Weird..Could be something More...

Verse 2 - Shit..Comes in Nice, a Little loud, but I'm liking the way your voice and flow sounds, good delivery and presence is ill. Again a confident spitter, which makes the track sound good. I like the coke addict line, pretty good lyrics. Flow seems a little different, but it's still nice.

Verse 3 - Voice is a little different. But i'm liking the delivery of your words. Kinda go together a little, and can't pick up every word, Enunciate a little more, but presense and confidence is ill.

Overall the Chorus kinda of made it a down fall, but the Confidence in the track made me want to listen to it more. Good stuff..

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did carson leard to eq...he lost his nasal presence haha....nah ehhh.....hook kills it....shoulda had ecko do it.....n ecko speaking of eq'ing turn down ya hi's...oh well i did a diss on this beat is a lil simple n repetive for a song i think....but yall didnt do bad....
wait verse 3 is carson isnt it....was troublesome verse one....now im confused...well its not bad not special.....keep movin forward

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Echo-Trouble-Jet (Hook Jet)
I found this and it made my voice sound normal
http://www.angelfire.com/creep/salvdorchosen/

I'm actually really happy with this track. props to ecko n trouble. we should do another one. thanks for the feed back guys.

i like the emotion yall threw on this the first verse was cool but fell a lil bit here and there no sweat......aight quality .......hook seems to low woulda been cool if it was higher.........second verse was alot different quality wise seems like it fell slightly flow was choppy here and there but was cool i enjoyed it ..........here we go the anticipated havent heard ya in a while ........flow was on point carson jiggety jet......lyrics was cool wow the verse just ended surpriseingly thought the hook woulda came again .......well there we goot a fairly solid collab could get in a chat room and talk levels and quality for the next one but overall shit was hoot keep doin em holla at me on "brainpain"

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Listen'n

damn man i have this same beat done lol..but w/e an plus i was gonna RTF man so dont post some shit like RTF for starters man i know what i gots to do...

HooK: Coulda bin done differently but it was hot in a sense cuz it was done differently....


1st: Flow is crazy lil choppy but works....like the lyrics concepts on point..like the flow...presence was nice...

HooK: Same

2nd: Coulda bin mixed better sounded distorted but he had some nice punchlines...like that shit proper flow was nice like the coke an got made lines...good shit..

HOok: Same

3rd: better than ur first verse like the presence on this one...u still sound a lil off beat...but picked it up....over all good

Over-all my theory

Ur mixin was on point... second dudes mixin coulda bin done better buts how y'all put it together so what else can i say over all solid track...the beat was fire an coulda came a lot harder at it than y'all did...but good shit my dude...by the way this how u give real feed back nigga..my ratin.. 8/10

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damn, dope beat choice..ecko that's a crazy verse man, hot lyrics with deadly emotion. the flow was smooth and what not too. the hook is good, just needs to be turned up cuz you have such a small voice there cjet, it's catch though. um troublesome you know what is is, your verse was hot, hot lyrics, hot emotion, hot flow and delivery it's all good. and for your verse cjet it was pretty good, feelin it and what not, the lyrics was good just need to turn up the volume it's hard to hear. anyway dope track yall. rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235147

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