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Old 09-21-06, 07:44 PM   #10
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rofl I love reading alikwar's post about anything, I can imagine the way he speaks in real life, just yelling everything out, no pausing no breathing just nutting out and making no sense.

Ok to the battle. one sided.
Punches are not even visible in Ali's verse, Words you have some decent punches, like the IQ line
Closer is decent, overall its a decent drop.

Alikwar,bro, I knwop you gonna come in here with your usual "calling me a hater, saying I dont knwo shit, and basiclyl getting all but hurt over a net battle.
But on the real, your verse sucked man, theres no structure (pressing enter at the end of each line)
theres no punches.
On the real bro, just cause it rhymes doesnt mean its dope. You lost this, so be a man suck it up,take time to learn and try again.

*waits for Alik to start his ramblings*