this is what your trying to say should look like. your problem is that you slack off and try to write in slang terms while your typing man. Your so used to doing this that you do it during your text battles and open mics. I used to do the same shit too. It makes us look stupid when we dont put periods or commas in an entire paragraph. Writing is an art form that although you might not think so, is looked and practically graded by the reader. Just work on your grammer because you cant make your flow or structure better by chopping as many words down as possible.

take this old punch...

I burn this emcee alive, till you can see his soul spark a light
But all jokes aside .....Put your verse either to the left or the right

It would look like ass if I droped it like

i burn dis mc alive til u can c his soul spark a lite
but all joke aside put ur verse either to da left or da right

I doesn't have the same affect it would if the wording, spelling and punctuation wasn't so poor nah mean.

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