But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream

you didn't come horrible tho.. i felt your last two sets were lacking in execution but they were good ideas. i've seen brail lines too many times.. your version of it wasn't original enough for me. the set i quoted was dope though.. i like how you said "nuttin" instead of "nothing", very subtle lol.

vs.

Dawg, i'm the best in the crew, so why you fuck around?
Well you are running E-Style... straight into the fucking ground
Fucking clown still thinks he's a God, but you bite rhymes dude
So we should call you Christ... but it's no miracle you bit his lines too

solid verse from you. i didn't like the cliche opener, i've seen that cliche used before and used better as well. the e-style line was simple, but worked and was effective cause of the pause you incorporated. christ line was dope.. if anything i might've done a little re-wording and used it as your opener. but yea, irrelevant.

v/ JTR. keep at it dudes.