meh, check.....

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check..........

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ight jack...
theres no place like home,so comfort is the battle field
he ended up in a dumpster...when jack clicked his heels
kids a virgin,him hittin pussy will never step in his world
last night i took a lesson in brail...when i was fingering ya girl
But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream
you'll lay flat bruised..when i empty on ya legs wit the weapon
so its under doctor supervision...if you ever see jack 2 steppin
they say when someone dies a new life begins,bra
so next time you skydive...hopefully your chute'll get the idea

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E-Style like BLAT!
You must be retarded, you're wack, the best is gon' win
If home is where the heart is
...i'll dump yours in the trash with tha rest of ya limbs
My heat'll melt ya like ice cream, ass kicked when i'm clobberin wimps
And you can Baskin the loss when i'm Robbin the win
Dawg, i'm the best in the crew, so why you fuck around?
Well you are running E-Style... straight into the fucking ground


Fucking clown still thinks he's a God, but you bite rhymes dude
So we should call you Christ... but it's no miracle you bit his lines too
You blind duke, thinkin I won't send ya to the hospital so ya life is short
Fucka chute not opening, i'll be sure to pull the cord... and end ya life support

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Up over no-shows.

But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream
^ ^LOL

VS

You must be retarded, you're wack, the best is gon' win
If home is where the heart is
...i'll dump yours in the trash with tha rest of ya limbs
^ ^LOL WHOA
My heat'll melt ya like ice cream, ass kicked when i'm clobberin wimps
And you can Baskin the loss when i'm Robbin the win
^ ^COULDA ALMOST BEEN A FEED BECAUSE OF HIS BEN n JERRY's LINE BUT
IT'S A BETTER ICE CREAM LINE TRUTHFULLY SO I GOTTA PUT IT AS A QUOTABLE
Dawg, i'm the best in the crew, so why you fuck around?
Well you are running E-Style... straight into the fucking ground
^ ^LMAO

v/ JTR

He came way more agressive than the other guy. Jack fell off at the end but he won by then so Blah @ tryna explain, JTR took it pretty easy

kids a virgin,him hittin pussy will never step in his world
last night i took a lesson in brail...when i was fingering ya girl
But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream

vs.

Dawg, i'm the best in the crew, so why you fuck around?
Well you are running E-Style... straight into the fucking ground
Fucking clown still thinks he's a God, but you bite rhymes dude
So we should call you Christ... but it's no miracle you bit his lines too

This battle was actually kinda close, not really what I expected. Trey had the Ben and Jerry line which was cool. Brail line was aight, tho I feel more coulda been done with the idea. Supervision line was an aight idea, but ya used it poorly, and I wouldn't have quoted it anyway since I used supervision wordplay awhile ago. From Jack, Jesus Christ line hit hard, line of the battle. Especially hit hard cuz that was when he knocked me outta KORV2 cuz I was too sick to write anything good and he bit lines against me. E-Style line was simple but effective.

Overally, tied in quotables, but Jack was way more consistent and his quotables were better so he got this.

Vote - JTR

trey


kids a virgin,him hittin pussy will never step in his world
last night i took a lesson in brail...when i was fingering ya girl

they say when someone dies a new life begins,bra
so next time you skydive...hopefully your chute'll get the idea

vs

JTR

E-Style like BLAT!
You must be retarded, you're wack, the best is gon' win
If home is where the heart is
...i'll dump yours in the trash with tha rest of ya limbs
My heat'll melt ya like ice cream, ass kicked when i'm clobberin wimps
And you can Baskin the loss when i'm Robbin the win


word this battle was close..trey methods your getting better each time i see you...this verse had some nice lines...but JTR quotables hit harder then Trey
cuz the Baskin line was my favorite line...cool battle short n sweet

vote-JTR

But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream
^HAHAHAHAH

Vs

You must be retarded, you're wack, the best is gon' win
If home is where the heart is
...i'll dump yours in the trash with tha rest of ya limbs
^Hard

Those were the best lines for both of you which were a tie IMO but the rest of JTRs verse was better.

v//JTR

JTR-You must be retarded, you're wack, the best is gon' win
If home is where the heart is
...i'll dump yours in the trash with tha rest of ya limbs

Trey-But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream

This battle wasnt the best from both I had trouble finding quotables but I give it to JTR slighty wit the My heat'll melt ya like ice cream, ass kicked when i'm clobberin wimps
And you can Baskin the loss when i'm Robbin the win... line both had ice cream lines for sum reason but JTR had one more so he gets my vote

Vote-JTR

But wait your a fag, scoping for guys..is how ya life be
his craving for Ben and Jerry's has nuttin to do wit ice cream

you didn't come horrible tho.. i felt your last two sets were lacking in execution but they were good ideas. i've seen brail lines too many times.. your version of it wasn't original enough for me. the set i quoted was dope though.. i like how you said "nuttin" instead of "nothing", very subtle lol.

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Dawg, i'm the best in the crew, so why you fuck around?
Well you are running E-Style... straight into the fucking ground
Fucking clown still thinks he's a God, but you bite rhymes dude
So we should call you Christ... but it's no miracle you bit his lines too

solid verse from you. i didn't like the cliche opener, i've seen that cliche used before and used better as well. the e-style line was simple, but worked and was effective cause of the pause you incorporated. christ line was dope.. if anything i might've done a little re-wording and used it as your opener. but yea, irrelevant.

v/ JTR. keep at it dudes.