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a few things do sound off with your flow....i am listening in hi fi tho hahahahahah.....good shit tho, lyrics need a pun or two thrown in for deep shit instead of just feelings....hook is good....robkilla killa's it....faster flow shoulda been in the second verse...entee was good too.....third verse shoulda been second and then second shoulda been third....imo.....but yea nice shit even i dont know which one you are fux the first second or third guy
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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