Please listen in MP3, cuz somethin sounds really off about the Hifi version right now

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a few things do sound off with your flow....i am listening in hi fi tho hahahahahah.....good shit tho, lyrics need a pun or two thrown in for deep shit instead of just feelings....hook is good....robkilla killa's it....faster flow shoulda been in the second verse...entee was good too.....third verse shoulda been second and then second shoulda been third....imo.....but yea nice shit even i dont know which one you are fux the first second or third guy

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this beat reminds me of a soap opera.... story shit...

hook: decent enough.... but feels like it needed a lil umph...catchy though

lyrics are put together good on this ... but im not sure what it is about the way you present the verse... it feels like it needs more commitment... like the emotion dosent match the story you spitting.... but the verse is right... im feelin the story in the track

3rd verse.... this is where the track picked off... rode the beat nice... 1st cat on the third verse is the best on this wit that fast flow... lol.. good twist to the track... 2nd on the third followed nice to... a lil more energy than the first 2 verses... seemed to grasp my ear a lil better...

hook was dope on this though and the first two verses juss needed a lil more passion it seemed... i dont know im .... but id spin this on my show Sunday

8/10

keep droppin yall

RTF :http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236961

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

Listening..

Beat is doooooooope..Hook comes in..ehhh, something sounds a little off with the flow, but it's nothing big. First verse, delivery is nice, sounds like you're struggling a little bit to ride this beat because it's so slow...Lmfao at the losin' my screws line haha, it made me chuckle. Next verse, flow is better, energy is lacking a little bit, but not much..Lyrical wise it's good. Last verse..Rob comes in really nice..Energy and flow are REALLY on point..Lyrical wise, I think this is probably the best verse..Other half of the 3rd verse, ehh, comes in kinda weak, then gets better. Flow is on point.

Overall, Solid track here.

RTF on "Bang With Me"

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Yo, this beat is too nice mayne....fasho....

Intro's coo, needed more emotion on it though. You know, more feeling in the "Baby"s, lol.

Ight....hook comes in.....real different then what I expected. But straight, thought it was gonna be faster....

First verse, seems that you slowed your verse down just to fit this beat. Sounds just like hook, slight downfall in that. Good story, good transition.....

Hook again.... feeling it a lot more

Second verse.....mayne...you should have used this for the first one fasho...and had someone else on the second verse *cough*. Lol. Good storyline again. Good flow, solid rhyme scheme....

Hook again..... (head noddin)

3rd verse.....Yo, nigga kilt this shit. This is what was more needed on the second verse. Good rhymescheme. Lol at the noddin off line. Tight verse. 2nd dude needs more emotion. Similar flow as first dude. Seemed he forced it a little bit, but thats ight, didnt take away from the song.

Overall, solid verses.....Good drop pimpin, keep em comin. And if you tryin to hit a remix up, you know who to call.

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word thanx.... the whole point of them rappin fast and me rappin slow is so u could get that transition..... it wouldnt work if our flows were all the same (aka fast) .... but word... i might rerecord for emotion....... its not really a struggle to stay on beat, its just my flow is slow to match the beat better.... and the first two verses have puns, but theyre real sublim.... so to not take away from the story

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beat is cool


flow fits the beat...But, I think a couple switch ups would have held my interest more

lyrics are fitting and so is the delivery


rhyming is consistent, if not unexciting

Hook...is this the hook? fits wel...needs to be mixed differently tho to set it apart...maybe more of a chorus effect


good track



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word..... but i dont know if u heard the whole track..... theres a big ass switchup.... lmao

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boooooooooo this sucks, and who mixes this shyt, worst mixing ever, and i can hear what sounds like madden on an xbox 360 in the background, lmao

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i know.... it fuckin sucks ... sorry sir

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hahahahaha aaaaaaahahahaha
lmfao wowh hahahahahaha
so true

man this beat is sick as hell i really like it...

the first guy was good pretty flow, sound a little too slow to me, a little basic, but i get it...its good for teh song type, good emotion man. this beat is so ill, good quality...i like the chorus

i like the second verse better. you had a more complex flow, it was good...more intertwining shit...better pauses too

chorus is good shit man

the third verse was killer man, real killer style, kinda eminemy flow...structure was ill, good quality...the second guy comes in and he didn't come as nice as the first guy on this verse, kinda in between pretty good though...

pretty song

7.5/10

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ok returning the favor foo...leave me a link next time and what not...

beat is nice....

hook is coo...which u was on some pro equipment...shit would be illy as fuck....liking the flow for real....delivery is coo...flow gets kinda repetitive at the end of the first verse.......when u rhyme all the shit with boo and what not...

there again im liking this hook foo...good shit.....

2nd verse....flow is nice again coming in...its a lil diff.....so its a good switch up and shit...liking how your not hitting the snares...too many cats on here go by the snares when it comes to flow...gotta hit it....it pisses me off....good to hear something different......

3rd verse...nice change up....diff voice...diff flow....makes it more interesting definitely...works well with rob on the 3rd.....ehh dunno about some of entee's lines...some seem a lil corny to me...dunno why,....just do.....

overall dope song my friend...drop some more shit on here more often...i def. think your prolly the most underrated on this site duuuude........and yes..i always return the favor...i just didnt see a link up there..link me next time....1

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