this beat reminds me of a soap opera.... story shit...
hook: decent enough.... but feels like it needed a lil umph...catchy though
lyrics are put together good on this ... but im not sure what it is about the way you present the verse... it feels like it needs more commitment... like the emotion dosent match the story you spitting.... but the verse is right... im feelin the story in the track
3rd verse.... this is where the track picked off... rode the beat nice... 1st cat on the third verse is the best on this wit that fast flow... lol.. good twist to the track... 2nd on the third followed nice to... a lil more energy than the first 2 verses... seemed to grasp my ear a lil better...
hook was dope on this though and the first two verses juss needed a lil more passion it seemed... i dont know im
.... but id spin this on my show Sunday
8/10
keep droppin yall
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