Yo, this beat is too nice mayne....fasho....

Intro's coo, needed more emotion on it though. You know, more feeling in the "Baby"s, lol.

Ight....hook comes in.....real different then what I expected. But straight, thought it was gonna be faster....

First verse, seems that you slowed your verse down just to fit this beat. Sounds just like hook, slight downfall in that. Good story, good transition.....

Hook again.... feeling it a lot more

Second verse.....mayne...you should have used this for the first one fasho...and had someone else on the second verse *cough*. Lol. Good storyline again. Good flow, solid rhyme scheme....

Hook again..... (head noddin)

3rd verse.....Yo, nigga kilt this shit. This is what was more needed on the second verse. Good rhymescheme. Lol at the noddin off line. Tight verse. 2nd dude needs more emotion. Similar flow as first dude. Seemed he forced it a little bit, but thats ight, didnt take away from the song.

Overall, solid verses.....Good drop pimpin, keep em comin. And if you tryin to hit a remix up, you know who to call.

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