Thread: Bang With Me
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Old 11-16-06, 08:09 PM   #10
TeamOne
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wow..... the beat is nice..... but i dont really expect a "u dont wanna fuck wit me" typa track... its funny cuz i already heard this song, i listen to all of u and Ikes shit but NEVER leave feed cuz im lazy...

ur emotion is fuckin killer, and ur delivery/presence is ALOT different from most tracks, altho u have that heavy punch style like usual.... really FEELIN ur emotion on this

but sometimes ur vocals seem TOO loud for the beat.... overpowerin maybe

hook is decent, catchy, but alil corny or predictable i should say for the rhymin words... like the adlibs... but some of ur doubles seem alil too loud.... should be alil discreet

god damn at "put periods between the letters"

should put somethin in that free spot before the hook after the second verse.... maybe just an adlib, but its alil too blank.... hook really gets catchy at the end, but i still think lyrics for it are "meh" BUT it is a HOOK so its understandable

decent shit, i still like some of ur older verses on that mizxtape better tho... u and Ike usually compliment each other well on tracks

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