man this beat is sick as hell i really like it...

the first guy was good pretty flow, sound a little too slow to me, a little basic, but i get it...its good for teh song type, good emotion man. this beat is so ill, good quality...i like the chorus

i like the second verse better. you had a more complex flow, it was good...more intertwining shit...better pauses too

chorus is good shit man

the third verse was killer man, real killer style, kinda eminemy flow...structure was ill, good quality...the second guy comes in and he didn't come as nice as the first guy on this verse, kinda in between pretty good though...

pretty song

7.5/10

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