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Old 11-24-06, 11:16 PM   #4
TeamOne
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God damn.... fuck u ike and b mag for never collabin wit me......

this shit is tight.... the beat sounds familiar, still raw.... ike is def ALOT better at makin hooks then Magic... lmao

ur verse is cool, nice emotion

Trip switches the flow up alil bit.... not really feelin it that much, but wen he speeds it up it gets really nice..... ur voice sounds alil weirder than usual..... ends the verse pretty nice....

Ike, u sound like Jin.... sorry for breakin it to u

B Mag.... u all of a sudden bringin alot more emotion.... but i unno if i like it or not.... i usually like wen u just try and sound baller as hell..... hah... some good line.... u usually structure punches well so that u can follow them to the punch.... good shit

the reverb on "thank u" is good

this shit was pretty decent... better than the other track with the three of u

well.... u can leave feed on ONE of the three tracks i have up right now if u want... pc
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