Meh......some mediocrity praising.
Your flow on the first verse wasn't really all that great. Your breath control sucked. Your delivery was nonexistant. The hook was garbage as well. Second verse was a little better, but not that great.
I know I don't really need to mention it, but YOUR QUALITY SUCKS HORRIBLY!!!!!!
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