Aight......line by line


That reflex, reflex, reflex shit in the background is annoying as hell. This whole first verse sounds like you were reading it off of a crayon scribbled paper. You sound like you're trying to force a swag with it too. Your hook sounds like it would have been better if you replaced your first verse with it. Your dubs are off in the second verse, but you did pick up the flow a bit.


And to be totally honest, if you weren't known on this board at all you would be getting exactly what I just said from everyone. The fact that you're a known crybaby ruins any chance at you getting any good feedback EXCEPT from those who could care less about you.


So take it for what it's worth and elevate

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