Stop sayin ya name on the intro so much... Once or twice is enough bro... Was that you having a convo with yourself aswell?...heh... Vocals could be a little clearer, it sounds like youve reduced the reverb with some filter.. Prolly could just use an EQ tweak..

Lyric style reminds me of old andre 3000 which is fucken awesome...props for that. One problem I did have which is most likly only personal preference was that your style is real metaphorical on this track n at times its hard to understand what your getting at with some lines as your listening, could be a little more direct with what your saying rather than expressing yourself somewhat abstract like that.

Hook was aiight, I feel as though this track could have benefitted from using a singer n more beat variations during the chorus and verses to emphasise certain lines n sort of lose that loop feel to it a bit.

But overall, I enjoyed listening.. If you can fix the clarity on your vocals just a tad this track would be killer... Good shit.......

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