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Old 12-01-06, 12:10 PM   #7
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You fuckin' gay, I'll toast your ass, this faggots beat
Te applied to Subway so he could handle footlongs and tons of meat
Pussy's sweet and I'll fuck all colors, shapes and sizes
while Te finds girly men with long hair and compromises
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it

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that shit you dropped was terrible. even the rhymes made me curse
you were tired of punchline battles & so excluded punchlines from your verse
did you see last weeks champ match? there was carnage and things
'n if dimebags lost, how the fuck will grams manage to win !?
but yo, i'm tired & depressed. my relatives gone, & friends left with them
everyone close to me dies.. so your rank makes you the next victim
i heard your poetic with it. but can't match, & won't be murdering me
i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

V/te ora....this was a good one...close battle...grams those lines where pretty good.. i felt them..but you did fell off in some areas also some played lines you had...te those lines i quoted where dope...you verse was all around more consistent with less played lines you get my vote.
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