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Old 12-01-06, 10:08 PM   #14
Native Pryde
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I had a great Thanksgiving, fuckin' slept like a rock
Te's family would've been thankful...................
until they found him stuffin' the bird full of cock
X-mas' round the corner, bout to set up a tree and shit
should I use a star ORA bow, I'll just impale Te's head on top of it

vs.

i been trying to get my weight up. make my way to the belt 'n rest
& seeing as he's only grams, we know him giving me the L.BS
i'm poetic too, cause when i say your "decent" i'm practicing hyperbole
but you've been working hard. elevating, trying to rob and destroy dudes
the fruit of your labour is. . . .you @ whatever job employs you
.this league is avg; when punks like you are allowed in? i get mad wit dam bars
& i"m only typing like this. to give an indication of how bad the league's gramm,ar

that thanksgivin line by grams was prolly tha funniest thing that I've read in awhile. tha ora line was cool too. But overall didn't come close to Te's verse. Openin was killer. Closer was ill. eurything in tha middle hit nicely. not much to say.

Vote-Te Ora
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