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Old 12-05-06, 04:58 PM   #10
Paranoid
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alright I'm feelin this beat, got that reminsce vibe to it. Your quality needs work but it's ok for now. Your flow is smooth, keepin it sooth too. Lyrics are pretty good, lyrics; nothin wrong with them. You talkin real on this one, I like that. The lil hook already added is pretty ill. but what else to say it's a short track. do somin longer next time.

word rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...487#post3118487
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